Eric Zivanai Poet Rhyme

Past Trauma

Gazing at my past,
amazing how victory has come so vast
chasing dreams fast, 
enemies have crowded my life like a movie 
cast
misery drafted its wrath,
my black history has paved a path

A road filled with deep potholes
find myself crucified by my own at the 
crossroads
A torment I fail to forget, Like a gamblers last 
bet

I walk amongst the blind, I talk to those who 
fail to find
burden's in my circumference, My whole life 
is turned to nonsense
An unwelcomed conscience,

signs of haste 
occupy me.
I am gazing at my past, WHERE WILL YOU FIND 
ME???

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Eric Zivanai April 16, 2012 at 10:59 AM Most would consider this script to be a poem,... but i was simply just writting down my life, my trials, my pain and my hopes.... thanks for the views and comments.... I will be publishing too so look out for that as wee.. God bless u guys

Chuck Novotny April 13, 2012 at 9:05 PM Congratulations on being featured this week, and on an excellent piece, also. - Chuck Eric Zivanai April 15, 2012 at 9:51 AM THANKS MAN, GOD BLESS YOU

The Situation April 13, 2012 at 5:56 PM Fantastic is right. You know poetry and poetry knows you. Eric Zivanai April 15, 2012 at 9:52 AM THANKS MAN,... GOD BLESS U.. I APPRECIATE IT

Patrick Cornwall April 13, 2012 at 7:01 AM fantastic poem and congrats on feature.. Patrick Eric Zivanai April 15, 2012 at 9:52 AM THANK U PATRICK,.. GOD BLESS U

Len Gasun April 13, 2012 at 2:54 AM You made a very nice poem for a past trauma, Eric. Thanks for sharing your poem. Keep up the good work.

Bojosi Ditshwele April 4, 2012 at 12:39 AM a nice recollection of the past Eric just keep them poems coming. Welcome to PS!!!