Past the Panes of Ice
Astonished sadness lies within her eyes,
who will see past the panes of ice,
a gasp frozen before her lips,
her shoulders cold and shake of this,
the lies, the lies, she tries to hide,
but sadness lies so clearly in those eyes
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