Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

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Past the Moon

~Past The Moon~ 
(Rhyme) 


 I watched you just right there 
 Standing in that pose of yours 
 Your familiar figure just stands 
 Opening every heart and door 

 You've brought such magic 
 Spreading every ounce of joy 
 As you travel beyond the boundaries 
 Never growing old but forever just a boy 

 Oh Peter Pan my heart quickened fast 
 As I watched you flying by 
 O Peter you were such a sight 
 To me you were a sweetie pie 

 Flying again you soared too soon 
 Crossing the sky past the moon. 


 Dorian Petersen Potter 
 aka ladydp2000 
 copyright@2006 


 January.23.2015

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Carol Mays January 31, 2015 at 8:02 PM Thanks so much for the inspiration and all the magic!

Pandita Sietesantos January 23, 2015 at 1:01 PM A brilliant masterpiece, Dorian! I just fell in love with Peter Pan all over again! This deserves a solid "7"! Enjoy a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita