Past Recollection

Another poem that I wrote alone,
Another one that blossomed from woe.
Will this be the last poem I'll writ?
The gift from the Goddess thrown in a pit?
Have I deicided the Moon's tallow dreams;
A divulged matricide to noose bind gleams.

Why is it suicide I clearly heed,
Carpe Diem, Alas I bleed.

Mother Moon have I annulled you,
or do You feel each mourning too?
One were You weren't pulled to plunder,
And vulgar glooms ain't our thunder...
Our flagrent gospel played on the violin,
Like my veins we cut the strings!

Maybe it was only more attention I required?
Ply it with the girl I vast desired...

Now frisson will our final chords,
Through the bleeding of silver swords.
The Moon hung severed and bloated high.
Hope outlast... By my inevitable nigh...

I wanted love, even if it would be paper thin,
So it wasn't only the blade to swim within!
there's no time to be afraid of fear;
'Cause I'll be hung like graveyard tears...

Death my Dark Messiah!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/29/2015 8:16:00 PM
"Mother Moon have I annulled you, or do You feel each mourning too?" Again, entrancing expressions. Love and attention I give to you today, such a talented poet, please more-your enrapturing writings i do adore!!! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/10/2013 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations!!! Jimmy --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA <
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Date: 11/6/2013 12:30:00 AM
Jimmy, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/4/2013 10:47:00 AM
I see you've met the welcoming committee lol. I enjoy your style. Shoot me a Soup Mail if you ever want to talk. Kudos on the poem :)
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:48:00 PM
Nice one, Jimmy! Welcome to poetrysoup! All the best my souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 10/30/2013 11:23:00 PM
Very deep and good imagery. Loved it.
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Date: 10/30/2013 7:31:00 PM
Hey, Jimmy how about posting another poem... :-).... xox~ LINDA
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Jimmy Brouwers
Date: 10/31/2013 4:33:00 AM
Sure, why not
Date: 10/30/2013 5:48:00 PM
Impressive work, keep up. I hope you have joined some the competitions in the site.
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Jimmy Brouwers
Date: 10/30/2013 5:51:00 PM
thanks! and no not yet, Started browsing through some now...
Date: 10/30/2013 5:28:00 PM
Hi Jimmy, wow...now this is poetry, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Jimmy Brouwers
Date: 10/30/2013 5:44:00 PM
Hi, and Thanks allot! I'll see if I can find it lol, and again, thanks. I don't get all to much positive feedback on my genre of poetry x). so this really makes my day.. same to you!...
Date: 10/30/2013 2:22:00 PM
Wow. That was deep. It really made me think. Great job.
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Jimmy Brouwers
Date: 10/30/2013 5:37:00 PM
thanks alot :)
Date: 10/30/2013 1:57:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Jimmy! - A deep poem - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jimmy Brouwers
Date: 10/30/2013 2:06:00 PM
Hi, Thanks Anne-lise , really appreciated! I hope I'll enjoy it here too :) and I will keep that in mind, thanks for the comment!
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