Donna Mceleny Poet Rhyme

Past and Present

PAST:
More time to spare
More words to share
More thoughts to bare...
less distractions in the air !

PRESENT:
Less time to spend
Less words to send
Less thoughts transcend...
distractions without end !

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Brenda Meier-Hans October 14, 2014 at 10:43 AM Well thought out poem Donna. Nice! Donna Mceleny October 14, 2014 at 10:58 AM thank you, Brenda...was thinking of my grown up children...everyone is so busy and time spent with them is precious in contrast to when they were younger and we were able to spend a lot of time together

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen October 14, 2014 at 10:33 AM Future,no time to spend as all time spent. Very thoughtful!