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Passions of the Sun

twilight twinkles dawn
the sun rises with our love
feeling warm inside


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June.17.2020
Best Haiku Ever 
Sponsored by~ Chantelle Anne Cooke

N/A for contest

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Paul Marc

July 17, 2020 at 12:50 PM

Perfectly expressed ~ Fav

Gershon Wolf

June 30, 2020 at 3:32 PM

Ha, ha! Only a uniquely talented mind could think of the 'Sun feeling warm!' Such an improbable thought, W.W. -- which blends perfectly into your haiku! Kudos, Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos

June 24, 2020 at 11:57 AM

Warmth love and twilight all go together like meat, veg and potatoes, or green red and blue - how could we ever have one without the other - but your combinations gets a first for romance! Good luck in the contest Wingster, Blessings and hugs, the Jennster will return!