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OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols relies upon 'the one breath limitation' this intuitive cadence pemits the 'reader' (reciter) to respond in an interpretative - interplay unique to the ' happening moment'

PASSIONS progressed   info of urgent fruitfulness encountered in  abundant profusion yet   mysterious in substance obsessed &elaborate sheltering in a wilderness of shrunken shaped   instincts

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Date: 10/23/2023 3:37:00 PM
loved the title and structure of your poem, Brian. You've said a lot about passions...up till the end 'wilderness of shrunken shaped instincts.' Nicely done, Sara
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