Passion

Stars shining brightly in the night sky.
Sweaty palms and butterflies.
 Deep in silent thoughts, while our
lips meet.
 So close in touch I can feel his 
heartbeat.
 Slowly pulling me in with every 
breath we take.
 Holding me in his arms as I begin to 
shake.
 Gently laying me down in the summers
grass.
 Taking our time, making this moment 
last.
 Our bodies intertwined like the twisting of a rope,
his hands firmly grasping my hair.
 Looking into each others eyes as we passionately 
make love in the warm night air.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 30, 2014 at 9:27 PM
LISA, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3
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April 26, 2014 at 1:26 AM
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Munoz Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 5:23 AM
Steamy Erotic Tantalizing Loved it. Bravo
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Ah, here we see passion overcoming and overwhelming! Keep on writing Lisa! MC
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 7:19 AM
- Lisa, I love this one !!! - Beautiful poem ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Solis Radius Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 2:38 AM
Hum§ Bodies, hands, hair...eyes! wOOw...what a romance! I like it, a real delight to the sense of imagination <3 Have a beautiful day, Rita SR.
Cannon Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 6:25 PM
loved it-wouldn't change a thing
Carroll Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 4:55 PM
Hi Lisa, Lovely poesia romantica.. Ken
That Archaic Poet Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 9:53 AM
Very passionate piece. My only suggestion to make this piece flow better would be to rework the last 4 lines. I would add more length and detail (imagery or emotion) to lines 15 and 16, so it evens out the beat and rhythm. Overall, good poem that I enjoyed; kudos :)
Mccall Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Ok I reworked it. ty for ur feedback.
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