"passing Time"

Tick Tock Luv... enjoyed this wonderful elegant write... so much said with a few words ..u could start a new trend my friend.. enjoyed with luv tonight...

boy you got that right but sometimes wish could turn back those hands lolgreat write here alot said in few word also thanks for your kind comments on my works I will be back to give ya more keep up the great work

I don't want to be here.. But we don't have a choice now do we? Great write Michael, enjoyed your perspective..luv W

so we are, lost in time Michael, excellent poem this, Harry

Quite a profound statement made in just five short lines, Michael. Very true -- time races on and we're "still here" until we take our last breath. Thanks for stopping by and visiting my work. I'm really glad I had a chance to read this one! Love, Carolyn

wow! Michael, and than U ask why I can compare. Right now I'm in front of my computer, and sadly we're still here. In the same spot from yesterday. Nothing changes, only the hands on the clock & with time racing all we're doing is losing moments and time. Funny how I don't want time to move, I love spacing out more than facing reality. But, if the clock moves backwards than I'll move as well. wow! sometimes I have 2 many thoughts for your little passages. imagine me I talk 2 much in reality,.p.d

enjoyed reading this sad poem...I feel your poem deeply today!