Angela Crabtree Poet Rhyme

Passing Time

What causes us to feel hungry
you would believe people wouldn't
why do some people become chunky
while others eat a lot and couldn't

why do we feel sleepy
you would conceive we wouldn't be tired
I pleasure in being speedy
I am confused with it being required

why do we feel discomfort
such as pain and sorrow
I need to feel comfort
so I gaze forward to morrow

why am I in question
there must be reasons
is my query for concession
just time to pass the seasons

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Lindsay Laurie November 19, 2020 at 4:44 PM G’day Angela … I guess when we see people different to us, we start a whole range of questions. I enjoyed your rhyming Angela - good job - Lindsay Angela Crabtree November 19, 2020 at 5:57 PM Thank you, Lindsay :)

Silent One November 19, 2020 at 7:01 AM Nice rhymes Angela, we all have many questions, sometimes we find the answers, sometimes we do not.. I always enjoy the messages in your words.. Angela Crabtree November 19, 2020 at 5:57 PM Thank you, Silent One :)

Paul Callus November 19, 2020 at 5:30 AM Angela, you ask questions because you are keen on learning and understand life. You say:"I pleasure in being speedy"; I take it that your mind is always on the go and you hate wasting time. (I stand to be corrected:)) Regards // paul Angela Crabtree November 19, 2020 at 5:56 PM Thank you, Paul. You're 100% correct. My mind is always busy and yes I do hate wasting time ;)

Vijay Pandit November 19, 2020 at 4:57 AM Thoughts never cease in active minds--well said, Angela. Angela Crabtree November 19, 2020 at 5:55 PM Thank you, Vijay :)

Victor Buhagiar November 19, 2020 at 3:41 AM Life has its calm and turbulences. We just have too be strong. ~~ Angela Crabtree November 19, 2020 at 5:55 PM I agree. We have to be strong :)

Caren Krutsinger November 18, 2020 at 5:42 PM I like the questioning voice in this missive. Angela Crabtree November 19, 2020 at 5:53 PM Thank you, Caren :)