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Passing Evening

Night sky entourage shining intermittent singing, chiming. Misty clouds are dancing by the solitary moon up high. Distant stars ebb and flow players in a theatre show. The moon and its soliloquy shrouded clouded mystery. Pantomime in fading glory indicates its silent story to distant planets audience seems a time to reminisce.

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Date: 1/10/2021 12:40:00 PM
I love this kind of meter and flow in poetry. Was starting at your first posts and this was my favorite from when you started. Rhymin with nice imagery, and easy to understand!
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/10/2021 2:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem Andrea. This is one of my earliest poems. I attempted to use the night sky as a metaphor for characters performing in a show

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