Passing...

Screams above the din

A moment of grief and loss

    A loved one passes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 15, 2011 at 4:06 AM
James, a very sad emotion when one has to find out a love one passed,..God bless,..Linda
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 1:14 AM
Good one, James and thanks for your SWEET comment to me today. sorry I can't read a longer one of yours right now. I have been here all night and am ready to drop dead tired, but I gotta finish what I started!! And I am almost cuaght up on comments now. LUv, Andrea
Hales Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 5:33 AM
I can relate to this .... sarah x Well penned James x
Lee Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 3:29 AM
I think you nailed a really subtle feeling here. I can definitely relate. Thanks for the great read! :) -Grace
Mehta Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 2:46 AM
Nice thought nicely expression with great images.
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