Notes About The Poem

passing

full moonset at dawn
she lights up a cigarette 
and mourns its passing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Very good! Succinct picture that I can visualize! Blessings, Chetta!
Achara Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Thank you.
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December 26, 2023 at 8:15 AM
You do these so well, many do not grasp the true aspect of a haiku but you seem to be an expert in it.. great imagery and I really liked the last line here... deep indeed.
Achara Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Thank you, but I am far from an expert!
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