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full moonset at dawn she lights up a cigarette and mourns its passing

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Date: 12/26/2023 8:33:00 AM
Very good! Succinct picture that I can visualize! Blessings, Chetta!
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Chetta Achara
Date: 12/26/2023 8:48:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/26/2023 8:15:00 AM
You do these so well, many do not grasp the true aspect of a haiku but you seem to be an expert in it.. great imagery and I really liked the last line here... deep indeed.
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Date: 12/26/2023 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, but I am far from an expert!

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