Passage

A random walk, yet
entropy dictates my course
forever downward.

Others may curse
this inexorable decline
yet I embrace it.

For in my passing
the seeds of new life are sown
the cycle goes on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations on your fine win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful piece of poetry. Great write! Pandita
Rodgers Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 11:02 AM
Thanks Pandita
Mehta Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 9:49 PM
Nice write on the cycle of life, Aberfoyle. congrats
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August 8, 2014 at 10:04 PM
Thanks Dr. M
Nance Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 9:14 PM
Well done, a beautifully worded haiku's :)
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August 8, 2014 at 10:03 PM
Thanks Casarah
Lindley Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 8:26 PM
A fine win with a fine write! Big congrats!!
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August 8, 2014 at 10:03 PM
Thanks Robert
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:57 PM
very nicely done. Congrats to you.
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August 8, 2014 at 10:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:26 PM
excellently penned Haiku well done on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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August 8, 2014 at 7:51 PM
Thanks Jan
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