Party Girl

Music booming

Alcohol consuming

Drinking

Sinking

No longer thinking

Popping pills

Wasting dollar bills

Party going

Pot smoking

Wild, out of control

No one on patrol

Acid trips

Now she slips

Trying to hide the pain

She does this all in vain...

She thinks it heals the hurt

 But now she's face down in the dirt

All the drinking makes her hurl

That's her life as a party girl...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 7, 2010 at 5:08 AM
Your form is rhyme. The road you are on is traveled by many and the results arepretty obvious BUT that doesn't seem to stop us from doing it? It may be a 20's thing? Most pull themsleves out of it...some don't I lost 1 friend to drugs..he went walking on the turnpike on acid. LIGHT & Love
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