Partly Cloudy - Senryu

I burned my breakfast

Today will be amusing

and partly cloudy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 11:36 PM
this is FANTASTIC haiku. (or better, senryu!!)
Harding Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 12:02 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I changed the genre to Senryu. PS - this one is about smoking pot (but not autobiographical)
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