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Parting Ways

Parting ways there was a duckling, searching for it's mother. a chick came to the duckling and it's fur is like the sun in summer Apparently, both of them were lost. they cried hearing each other while comforting one another and their hearts were soft. they helped eachother out, and soon they heard a shout. the voice that they longed for and they don't feel sad anymore. soon,they both had to bid farewell, and they knew they won't be so well, however, the sun is setting down, they took their own ways with certain frown. Then now came the real sorrow, as they know they won't see each other tomorrow. walking away with eyes teary as they understand it will be a good memory.

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Date: 6/17/2023 4:57:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on parting through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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