Parting Song

The lone bird sang a parting song
over the country thatched roof houses,
the song so sweet and loving.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 10:54 PM
Sweet indeed, Akham. Bird song is so pretty
Croft Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 8:44 AM
very nicely put. the birds in my back yard keep by dogs and cat occupied with their songs and chirping!
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Such vivid imagery i love to hear the birdsong when I go on my daily walks:-) hugs Jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 7:59 AM
You send me in a part of nature I love so much. Well done. ~~
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