Connie Gildersleeve Poet Rhyme

Part of Who We Are

Inexorable march of wrinkles can't stop,
Inching closer every day we do
It seems the elderly are them not us
There's no starting anew

A stubborn streak of faith some needs
Some may eat until their wrinkles out fill
Neurotic solutions brain creates,
Visions of Barbie doll some will

Fake boobs perk though butt droops still
Disgracefully aging some will play
Airbrushing out their lives and why?
We can't slow age or delay

Wrinkles antique smiles they are
It's part of who we are your age
A unique patina our wrinkles we have,
Don't diminish your worth so life engage


For Roy Jerden's contest, "To Yoda, An Ode"

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Skat A March 27, 2013 at 4:43 PM Connie, this is very clever, i like the winning poem, Congrats~SKAT

Donna Jones March 22, 2013 at 4:38 PM I love this one Connie ..congratulations on your win..Donna Connie Gildersleeve March 22, 2013 at 6:19 PM Donna thanks for your congrats. Much appreciated. Have a great weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A March 22, 2013 at 4:26 PM CONNIE, a nice winning poem... many congrats :-).... always & forever* PD Connie Gildersleeve March 22, 2013 at 6:20 PM Thanks for the congrats. It means a lot, warm Smiles, Connie

Hidden Sister March 22, 2013 at 10:55 AM So true nice message and poem! Jen Connie Gildersleeve March 22, 2013 at 12:46 PM Thank you for your comment Jen. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Carrie Richards March 22, 2013 at 9:16 AM LOve these words of wisdom!! This is one I will keep in my wallet as a great reminder with each passing year!! Connie Gildersleeve March 22, 2013 at 9:28 AM Sometimes we need to be reminded that growing old is a natural part of life. No matter if your go under the knife each year that goes by is added to your age. Your comment means a lot to me. Warm Smiles, Connie

Painted Hunter March 22, 2013 at 6:26 AM haha...Congrats on your win, Connie! Connie Gildersleeve March 22, 2013 at 8:56 AM Caleb thanks for the congrats. I enjoyed writing in this style. Warm Smiles, Connie

Roy Jerden March 22, 2013 at 5:54 AM Excellent poem it be! Write like Yoda, you do. Laugh you make us. On your win congratulations we give! Connie Gildersleeve March 22, 2013 at 8:59 AM Roy much thanks for the congrats, you did. Enjoyed Yoda style say I must. Warm Smiles, Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 22, 2013 at 5:52 AM Many congrats on your winning spot Connie love xx Connie Gildersleeve March 22, 2013 at 9:00 AM Thank you for your congrats it means a lot to me. Warm Smiles, Connie

Dan Kearley February 28, 2013 at 4:00 PM Ha ha...I was a bit confused at first why you were writing this funny way? Then at the end it all made sence..It was for the contest... I C :o) Truth and wisdom be told,you can hide the world from your age,but you will still yet be old... :o) Loved it! Oh! And thank you for you kind comment on my "The Poet" poem. Connie Gildersleeve March 1, 2013 at 1:06 PM Dan thank you for your delightful comment. I thought "To Yoda An Ode" would be fun to write, and I was watching the Emmys on TV. The older movie stars all nipped and tucked, holding off the age thing. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debbie Guzzi February 27, 2013 at 2:10 PM I enjoyed your verse this afternoon. Light & Love Connie Gildersleeve February 28, 2013 at 4:43 AM Thanks Debbie for your comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Carrie Richards February 26, 2013 at 7:30 PM Amen to this poem!!! I love this and it speaks for many of us!! A beauty comes with experience! :) Connie Gildersleeve February 27, 2013 at 4:27 AM Carrie thanks for your added wisdom. These movie stars that are 50 and up look so imperfect. Not a wrinkle and those much older stars I have to laugh. Who are they fooling, not the real down to earth people that see them on TV. They still have to take there clothes off at night and see their actual age. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2013 at 5:03 PM words of wisdom!! I enjoyed this one. Connie Gildersleeve February 27, 2013 at 4:33 AM Thanks Andrea for your comment. I wrote this while watching the award show of the stars. The older ones look not normal. They still have to take there clothes off at night and see there real age. Must be a shock to their system to see their saggy skin in the mirror and look up to see their plastic like face. Warm Smiles, Connie

Painted Hunter February 26, 2013 at 1:50 PM Haha...can't help but smile when you read this...envisioning Yoda! Connie Gildersleeve February 26, 2013 at 2:39 PM Thanks Caleb for your comment and for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

Donna Jones February 26, 2013 at 1:42 PM Some of us feel we have actually earned and enjoyed making every wrinkle and sunspot...I do... many hours spent in nature and sunshine and wind..loved your poem :-) :-) Connie Gildersleeve February 26, 2013 at 2:45 PM So many older actresses look like there plastic barbies but under their clothing they can't hide there age. I just had to express it in a poem. Thanks for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie

David Williams February 26, 2013 at 11:02 AM Connie yep it happens to us all...David Connie Gildersleeve February 26, 2013 at 1:10 PM I must have been sleeping writing this. I had to rewrite this poem-Oops, Connie

Sara Kendrick February 26, 2013 at 10:42 AM Enjoyed reading your creative work..Wrinkles are not wrinkles but character lines..Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara Connie Gildersleeve February 26, 2013 at 1:11 PM I must have been sleeping when I wrote this poem. I had to rewrite it-Oops. Connie

Debbie Guzzi February 26, 2013 at 9:32 AM Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Light & Love Connie Gildersleeve February 26, 2013 at 1:12 PM I must have been sleeping when I wrote this poem. I had to rewrite it-Oops. Connie

Russell Sivey February 26, 2013 at 9:10 AM This is a very wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this magnificent poem this morning! What a enlightening piece, quite the intriguing write, Great Work!! Connie Gildersleeve February 26, 2013 at 1:13 PM I must have been sleeping when I wrote this poem. I had to rewrite it-Oops. Connie