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Parking On Pelican Pier

Parking on Pelican Pier (Not so original monoku) contest 




             Pelican Pier here I come...Landing to eat Tuna Tuesday treats

Copyright © Brian Davey | Year Posted 2016

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April 9, 2016 at 10:25 PM

This really was a cute one, Brian. Looking back now I probably should have put this on my winner's list ... I'll try and be a better judge next time ... promise! ... lol. I hope you enjoyed writing for my contest nonetheless, and will continue to write for my future contests :)

April 10, 2016 at 12:49 AM

No hard feelings friend every poem in your winners list was deserving, I am not that selfish of a person

April 8, 2016 at 7:35 AM

I enjoyed this monoku, Brian, including the alliteration. Would have expected to see this among the winners! // paul

April 9, 2016 at 12:57 AM

Thank you Paul! I was a little surprised that I received an N/A in this contest but you win some and you lose some.

Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2016 at 8:41 PM

hey, this is CUTE. Didn't it make it into the contest on time? I quite like it!!

April 9, 2016 at 12:58 AM

Thanks Andrea and yes it did make it on time, I was the last entry but still made it and received an N/A. Oh well next time

Lenny Gazbowski

April 5, 2016 at 10:41 PM

Bravo Brian, excellent one liner.

April 7, 2016 at 4:25 AM

Thank you Lenny

April 5, 2016 at 3:04 PM

Avery clever and fun to read Monoku, Davey! Loved it :)

April 5, 2016 at 7:34 PM

thanks Laura it was a fun one to write

April 5, 2016 at 11:26 AM

such a delight; very uniquely penned, brian!... wow and huggs

April 5, 2016 at 7:33 PM

Thank you so much Nette

April 5, 2016 at 5:49 AM

lovely alliteration and imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

April 5, 2016 at 7:29 PM

Thanks Jan I tried to mix a few styles up in this little line

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