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Parking On Pelican Pier

Parking on Pelican Pier (Not so original monoku) contest Pelican Pier here I come...Landing to eat Tuna Tuesday treats

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/9/2016 10:25:00 PM
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This really was a cute one, Brian. Looking back now I probably should have put this on my winner's list ... I'll try and be a better judge next time ... promise! ... lol. I hope you enjoyed writing for my contest nonetheless, and will continue to write for my future contests :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/10/2016 12:49:00 AM
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No hard feelings friend every poem in your winners list was deserving, I am not that selfish of a person
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/8/2016 7:35:00 AM
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I enjoyed this monoku, Brian, including the alliteration. Would have expected to see this among the winners! // paul
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/9/2016 12:57:00 AM
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Thank you Paul! I was a little surprised that I received an N/A in this contest but you win some and you lose some.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/7/2016 8:41:00 PM
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hey, this is CUTE. Didn't it make it into the contest on time? I quite like it!!
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/9/2016 12:58:00 AM
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Thanks Andrea and yes it did make it on time, I was the last entry but still made it and received an N/A. Oh well next time
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Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 4/5/2016 10:41:00 PM
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Bravo Brian, excellent one liner.
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/7/2016 4:25:00 AM
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Thank you Lenny
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/5/2016 3:04:00 PM
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Avery clever and fun to read Monoku, Davey! Loved it :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/5/2016 7:34:00 PM
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thanks Laura it was a fun one to write
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 4/5/2016 11:26:00 AM
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such a delight; very uniquely penned, brian!... wow and huggs
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/5/2016 7:33:00 PM
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Thank you so much Nette
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/5/2016 5:49:00 AM
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lovely alliteration and imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 4/5/2016 7:29:00 PM
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Thanks Jan I tried to mix a few styles up in this little line

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