Meter - Trochaic Pentameter
Rhyme - A-A / B-B
Why am I emerging from the dark Staring at a bench in City Park. Breathless air without a bird in song. So I sit, unknowing, yet belong. Sudden waves of anguish flood my mind. Feral, vicious, senseless bursts of time. Then a calming whisper fills my ear And my reason now, for being here. Minutes of my final day proceed. Mockingbirds and peanut squirrels to feed. Speckled sun through breezy treetops sway And two hidden figures inch my way. Choking arms, a weakness, loss of breath; Forced behind a thicket to my death. Off they bolted free without a trace. Now I'm vengeance. Patiently I wait. I'm aware each footstep, as they move, But this peaceful park is where I choose. Soon they stalk again. I know the place. Little do they know the wrath they face. Gene Bourne 11-29-13 .
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