Paris

The city of love
Her streets sing outloud in love
Her tower is love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 1:20 PM
A beautiful place you describe to the 'T'. nice job...Raul
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May 14, 2009 at 12:08 PM
i love PARIS--it is the city of love--and passion,her tower is love,and people like you makes us believe this---bravo----charma
Goff Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 10:55 AM
sweet senyru! Jeremiah! Jim
Winter Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 5:12 PM
Lovely senryu. Oh Paris, yes so they say. Your poem makes me dream. Thanks for your thoughtful comments. Love, shar
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May 13, 2009 at 2:06 PM
How I would like to visit Paris, Jeremiah! But at least all of us can see its beauty through your eyes in this great senryu. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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May 13, 2009 at 1:46 PM
MUCH LOVE SURROUNDES YOU IM PROUD TO KNOW YOU AS AN ARTIST AND A PERSON GREAT JOB
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