Paris

The city of love Her streets sing outloud in love Her tower is love

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Raul Moreno

Date: 5/17/2009 1:20:00 PM

A beautiful place you describe to the 'T'. nice job...Raul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/14/2009 12:08:00 PM

i love PARIS--it is the city of love--and passion,her tower is love,and people like you makes us believe this---bravo----charma

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/14/2009 10:55:00 AM

sweet senyru! Jeremiah! Jim

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/13/2009 5:12:00 PM

Lovely senryu. Oh Paris, yes so they say. Your poem makes me dream. Thanks for your thoughtful comments. Love, shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/13/2009 2:06:00 PM

How I would like to visit Paris, Jeremiah! But at least all of us can see its beauty through your eyes in this great senryu. Nice work! Love, Carolyn

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/13/2009 1:46:00 PM

MUCH LOVE SURROUNDES YOU IM PROUD TO KNOW YOU AS AN ARTIST AND A PERSON GREAT JOB