Pareidolia

Pareidolia always surrounding ya Feeling a type of withdrawal What’s really there before ya? Taking control of what you saw An aimless stimulus Being perceived as something of significance A subliminal message It can’t only be me Is it a subconscious distraction To feel less lonely

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/1/2024 11:17:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Eric Ashford

Date: 7/8/2019 7:54:00 AM

Cool poeming. Like its colloquial neatness of expression.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/23/2019 3:31:00 AM

"What’s really there before ya? Taking control of what you saw" - a subliminal message. Hmmm. Well done, Jess. Welcome to Poetry Soup!