Parched

She wished to be held in her lover's arms for the ink of her sword had parched. Winner of the One Liner Contest. Sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 12/28/2019 12:43:00 PM

Wow. A first place for me. Kind wishes, Kai

Priyanka Chugh
Date: 12/30/2019 3:07:00 AM

Thankyou :)

Date: 12/27/2019 8:27:00 PM

I enjoyed this image you created in my mind. Congrats for the win.

Priyanka Chugh
Date: 12/30/2019 3:07:00 AM

Thankyou! :)

Date: 12/27/2019 3:26:00 PM

Lovely, Priyanka. Congrats on your win.

Priyanka Chugh
Date: 12/30/2019 3:08:00 AM

Thankyou so much.

Date: 12/27/2019 2:36:00 PM

Priyanka, this is very good, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Priyanka Chugh
Date: 12/30/2019 3:09:00 AM

Thankyou, Eve.

Date: 12/27/2019 10:28:00 AM

nice one.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Priyanka Chugh
Date: 12/30/2019 3:09:00 AM

Thankyou :)