Parched

Doused by a cloud, Earth Must drink quickly as she’s parched; It’s days between clouds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Oh, I just love the expressive beauty of your imagery, M.L. An awesome haiku that comes to life with your words. Warmest holiday wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Kiser Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thank you Susan, I'm glad you liked it. The best of the Holiday Season to you and yours.
Wolf Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Just right! Well-envisioned. Precisely as you've penned it. :) gw
Kiser Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Thanks Gershon for your comments.
Mcferran Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 4:45 PM
So perfectly phrased... love this!!! ;)
Kiser Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Thank you, Rhona; I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Ah, this reminds me of those times when the earth's cracks make me sad as I walk through my yard that is crying for water.
Kiser Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Yes, the earth needs water to survive, as well as we. Thanks.
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