Parched

Doused by a cloud, Earth Must drink quickly as she’s parched; It’s days between clouds.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/21/2018 9:59:00 AM

Oh, I just love the expressive beauty of your imagery, M.L. An awesome haiku that comes to life with your words. Warmest holiday wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/21/2018 10:51:00 AM

Thank you Susan, I'm glad you liked it. The best of the Holiday Season to you and yours.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/20/2018 6:52:00 PM

Just right! Well-envisioned. Precisely as you've penned it. :) gw

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/21/2018 9:21:00 AM

Thanks Gershon for your comments.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 12/20/2018 4:45:00 PM

So perfectly phrased... love this!!! ;)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/21/2018 9:20:00 AM

Thank you, Rhona; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/20/2018 4:23:00 PM

Ah, this reminds me of those times when the earth's cracks make me sad as I walk through my yard that is crying for water.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/21/2018 9:20:00 AM

Yes, the earth needs water to survive, as well as we. Thanks.