Paranoid

Blue eyes turn green,
Seeing mean tricks;
Unseen, chances.

Jack Horne for Dana Lynn's Second Hand Emotion contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2012 at 6:12 AM

Congratulations Jack on your HM in Dana'lynn's "The Secondhand Emotion" contest. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

January 16, 2012 at 9:22 PM

Congrats, Jack. Great write. Nice going. Ralph

Robert A. Dufresne

January 16, 2012 at 7:09 PM

Congratulations on you HM ,Jack.

Debbie Guzzi

January 16, 2012 at 3:49 PM

sounds like jealousy! Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

January 16, 2012 at 11:35 AM

Enjoyed reading this one..Not sure exactly what you wanted one to get from this one..Reads like a good entry..Good luck in contest..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind reviews of my work..Sara

M.I.A .

January 14, 2012 at 2:52 AM

yes, this is simply interesting. i wonder what you're thinking when you wrote it? good luck on the contest jack

Andrea Dietrich

January 11, 2012 at 6:28 PM

There you go again, using simplicity in such a GREAT way for the contests!! Good luck, Jack. You are one clever guy. (I got a kick out of BL's comment. I think those not English might not get the symbolism of green)