Paranoid

I fill the void

Consumed within

I glance at Sin

I fall

I hit the wind

I send my strength into the crevice

Of this precipice of hope

About to break

I realize it was my mistake

For the life I choose to live.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Adeite Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 1:16 PM
very thoughtful... keep writing and try to read up the various forms of poetry to avoid the I do not know ' form
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 10:53 AM
Nicely written admittion of being human. Sara
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