Get Your Premium Membership

Paranoid

I fill the void Consumed within I glance at Sin I fall I hit the wind I send my strength into the crevice Of this precipice of hope About to break I realize it was my mistake For the life I choose to live.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/2/2009 1:16:00 PM
very thoughtful... keep writing and try to read up the various forms of poetry to avoid the I do not know ' form
Login to Reply
Date: 9/2/2009 10:53:00 AM
Nicely written admittion of being human. Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs