Paralyzed Pen

No words from my pen. Want inner peace, and amen. Plus, God's rules, all ten. Rhymed Senryu 12/14/2020

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John Watt

Date: 12/14/2020 11:26:00 PM

Amen. My pen has been lost lately, figuratively speaking. Inner peace is the ultimate goal on earth, is it not? And I love your reference to the Big Ten ~ John

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/14/2020 11:38:00 PM

Inner peace makes for outer peace. The Big Ten.))) ~ are an big help. And avoiding negative nabobs with Poisonous narratives. You are marvelous and gifted poet. No words slapped on paper. I call pretend poetry, Pangie xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/14/2020 6:06:00 PM

Sounds like you've run into a 'stone' wall as well... Here's to Relaxation and Ease, gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/14/2020 6:20:00 PM

Walls came tumbling down, Gershom. )))) As in Jericho.. Pangie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/14/2020 4:10:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, oh I like this Panagiota sometimes words from the pen does not come easy. When it does the pens flow. Hugs Darlene xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/15/2020 9:31:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, yes I do understand writers block. When the pen does not want to create words, it is hard to write. Merry Christmas my friend. Darlene xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/14/2020 4:18:00 PM

Hello Darlene..Ah, so you understand. Then, when Centered, I can pen again. Warm Yuetide Wishes, Your friend, Pangie xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/14/2020 3:36:00 PM

Love it. God B L E S S you

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/14/2020 4:00:00 PM

Howdy Poetess. Always have enormous respect for commenters like you, Chantelle and Darlene. Why is that! because you are consistent. This is as concrete as I can be. Thank you. Pangie xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/14/2020 2:32:00 PM

The dreaded wall or the inkwell has dried up, it happens to us all. You cant force a poem, Well I cant anyway. Take a break and soon the thoughts will come back and the inkwell will be overflowing again. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/14/2020 2:48:00 PM

Yes, they will. Thank you Pangie