PARALLEL (a tristich )VERSE(Inspired by Hebrew Biblical parallels) it comprises L1 theme L2 ECHO of theme L3 Punchline/observation
Wardrobes, full of clothes, crossstitch cluttered walls- her shadow still clouds my mind tears begin to fall. emotion becomes a flood- a cataract of regret flows a realisation dawns, fleeting thoughts crystallize- as 'as is' moment of hope is born
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