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Parallelogram

parallelogram floats 'pon upper air currents..... jet exhaust
I saw a perfect parallelogram in the sky yesterday coming back from the eye surgeon.. (Not me this time my husband.)' Those jet seem to pass so close I don't see how they don't collide..

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Date: 11/6/2014 12:45:00 PM
Yes, I can visualize. Love Sara....rajat
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Date: 11/6/2014 12:45:00 PM
Yes, I can visualize. Love Sara....rajat
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Date: 11/5/2014 3:39:00 PM
well expressed haiku !!!
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Date: 11/5/2014 12:38:00 PM
Contrails in the sky -- great capture of the natural elements and technology -- then using mathematics to span both arenas . . . very clever and thought provoking. Your are awesome, mighty is your pen and keen your observation.
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