Parallelogram

parallelogram floats 'pon upper air currents..... jet exhaust
I saw a perfect parallelogram in the sky yesterday coming back from the eye surgeon.. (Not me this time my husband.)' Those jet seem to pass so close I don't see how they don't collide..
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Chakrabarty Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 12:45 PM
Yes, I can visualize. Love Sara....rajat
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 12:45 PM
Yes, I can visualize. Love Sara....rajat
Squyres Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 3:39 PM
well expressed haiku !!!
Meade Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 12:38 PM
Contrails in the sky -- great capture of the natural elements and technology -- then using mathematics to span both arenas . . . very clever and thought provoking. Your are awesome, mighty is your pen and keen your observation.
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