Parallel

Two soul bound shackled hearts Whispered echos so devoted What we share remains forever Every love poem that is quoted Not even in death shall we part Living infinity in the multiverse Together we remain parallel Loving energy to never disperse Legendary of all romances Throughout space we are parallel Loving each other deeply All time epic romantic tale Forever I am yours and you are mine No other love shall ever surpass Our love lasting an eternity Together as time will pass Higher than any mountain Emotions deeper than any sea Upon every breeze soaring Where you are there’s always me

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/3/2022 11:12:00 AM

Your gift for speaking love and romance in your verses is so beautifully expressed in this poem Brenda! Congratulations on your win! So wonderful to see you back on the soup - it has been too long. Blessings my friend

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/3/2022 2:19:00 PM

Sam yes it has been quite awhile but hopefully I’m back for a long time! Thank you so much and I love the comment and welcome the read!:)

Neva Romaine

Date: 2/3/2022 11:01:00 AM

A huge congratulations on your win Brenda! Wonderful and romantic. Neva

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/3/2022 2:19:00 PM

Thank you so much!:)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/31/2022 9:08:00 AM

This is absolutely romantic, Brenda ~ one of those special relationships which last forever. ~ Warm regards // paul

Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/1/2022 11:51:00 PM

Paul that you I do appreciate the read and comment!;)

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/28/2022 2:27:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. It's my prayer that you're well... healthy (I mean) by God's grace. God bless you.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2022 4:38:00 AM

Beata yes I am doing good thank you! And thx for the read and lovely comment!:)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/27/2022 10:07:00 PM

Wonderful love story Brenda!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2022 4:38:00 AM

James thanks so much!:)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/27/2022 11:02:00 AM

Put it to music, Brenda. It's smashing! Get out that guitar! :) gw

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2022 9:18:00 PM

Gershon some of my work has been put to music of sorts lol spoken word anyway I’m on SoundCloud!:)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2022 4:38:00 AM

Haha! Well I couldn’t sing it because I can’t sing lol! But thank you Gershon so much!:)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2022 4:02:00 AM

I feel this way about my late husband Brenda. Your poem connects souls in love together so beautifully. There are no boundaries of time, love transcends and lives forever. A fave for me Brenda. Blessings xxoo

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2022 4:37:00 AM

Connie thank you so much! I appreciate the read and comment!:)