Parallax

we fall and then rise
correcting parallax 
changing tracks
becoming wise
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Blackburn Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 4:10 PM
I like it, it’s simple and gets the message across. I wish I didn’t struggle so much with short poems, teach me your ways.
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August 22, 2024 at 7:17 PM
I’m happy you enjoyed, Everleigh
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