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Parallax

we fall and then rise correcting parallax changing tracks becoming wise

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Date: 8/22/2024 4:10:00 PM
I like it, it’s simple and gets the message across. I wish I didn’t struggle so much with short poems, teach me your ways.
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Date: 8/22/2024 7:17:00 PM
I’m happy you enjoyed, Everleigh

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