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Paragon

SHORT VERSION Deep, in the voids of scattered bones, in the dare of the miasmic zone- lies a mischief- bright, in the depths of darkness, where shadows bloom their blight and stone. There, a little messenger dares to rise, defying the gloom and enchanting the realm. ~With fragile petals, kissed by rays of inner light, she brings a glimmer-dance of hope like a Saintly paradite. Her peridot heart jots a tiny plot to hit the spot on, where sorrows dwell. Sways incandescently humbles essenely. mumbling a fluouric prayer. The little flower stands fertile, casting an audacity spell of good nature and unity. It is there! Just look at it well, well it is sitting there like a living gold! Crystal on burning aspire, molting fluora feather wing has become in her maturity like a desert rose. With paragonic scent of petracore, like whispers of forgotten dreams, of innocence, imbue of love's alien soil. Seeds innuendo, in a dojo of love. A transplant of the great transparent sea, of hope- beneath a starlit sky above, where dreams seed in, where the universe whispers, she reminds us to "Believe." In wishes beyond the stars.

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Date: 1/21/2024 12:45:00 PM
You spiritual poem weaves a vivid imagery and emotion, exploring the depths of darkness and the emergence of hope in an imaginative and ethereal realm. The language is rich and evocative, creating a mesmerizing atmosphere that draws the reader into a world of contrasts and transformative beauty.. Your concluding lines beautifully tie together the themes of hope, belief, and the transcendence of wishes beyond the stars.
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Jude Herrick
Date: 1/21/2024 1:50:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One. One can imagine (a Poet's dream), God working through every seam, wonders yet to unpackage and cry over, like a child at Christmas getting unexpected gift of thoughtfulness's esteem, and of that listening heart, by one who knew and listened all along through the doubts and the rebellions, notwithstanding. So many mysteries to uncover. Of the cannot yet divulge, but is chomping at the bit for its discovery things, (God clapping with excitement with heavily buttered corn and a sidekick corn kitty buttered over, hair slicked, beans buttered in show of feet during the unwrapping of His creation's love feats.) In purposeful perpetuity. Little Big things.
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Silent One
Date: 1/21/2024 12:46:00 PM
The universe whispers through the flower, serving as a reminder to "Believe" in the magic that resides within dreams and aspirations. Another epic write my friend.
Date: 1/20/2024 9:46:00 PM
Your way with weaving words is remarkable! “ A transplant of the great transparent sea, of hope-” creative description and i love how you mentioned peridot heart and the opening lines too were so captivating! I can see through your words what you delivered a scene that is magical. Fragile petals touched by rays of light. Brilliant diction and metaphors along with alluring alliterations! Pleasure reading such profound work. Sending you light always
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Jude Herrick
Date: 1/20/2024 9:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Ink Empress.
Date: 1/20/2024 4:35:00 PM
You're such a an awesome poet Jude. This is really a work of art. May I ask who your heroine is?
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/20/2024 5:47:00 PM
Ahhh. Are you Catholic by chance?
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Jude Herrick
Date: 1/20/2024 4:40:00 PM
Oh that's an easy one, the Blessed Mother of Our Lord ! Thank you, Tom

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