Home » Poems » Michael J. Falotico » Paradise Under the Moonlight

Paradise Under the Moonlight

As we lean together against our palm tree chair, the moonlight peeks through with a warming glare... Our glass like surroundings reflect a sky that is covering our bare innocence... A place for you and me to hide and be away from negativity with a peaceful distance... We can live off the fruits of each other and make love under a raining moonlight... The sky is our bedroom ceiling with the stars as our night lights... An island called home for just you and me, to live and love where we hold the keys... by Michael J Falotico for Gail's "Moonlight contest"

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Tropical Theme" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 3/17/2012 8:16:00 AM

A wonderful poem.Congrats Michael on your win in the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 7:50:00 PM

congrats Michael luv on a fab win for this tropical treasure .. oh such a grand getaway.. JG is there luv.. wonderful as always.. xoxo..

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/16/2012 11:56:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Michael! I really like the line "The sky is our bedroom ceiling with the stars as our night lights" Great imagery. Love, Kim

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/16/2012 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations Michael this is lovely xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/15/2012 10:11:00 AM

So super romantic Michael..I love the raining moonlight indeed-Cahrma

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/11/2012 12:38:00 PM

Quite a romantic write Michael, I am sure Gail will be enjoying this one. All the best to your for the contest :) love Wilma

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/10/2012 10:15:00 PM

Very romantic, Michael! I love it. Gail is going to have a tough time judging her first contest with so many great entries. I wouldn't want to do it...I love the picture of you and your beautiful wife on your blog spot. You look like such a happy couple! Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/10/2012 8:23:00 PM

thankxx luv for a terrific blog for Traie's sake .. thankxx for info too Michael.. JG in appreciative mode always and forever ..xxoxo

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/10/2012 11:07:00 AM

A beautiful and romantic write, Michael. Excellent! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/10/2012 9:21:00 AM

ah so romantic .. paradise is where luv and lovers abide Michael as we know and share this .. a perfect expression for Gail's contest.. much good luck luv.. JG always in tropical mode .. xoxo.. yes a great blog and cannot believe u were also attacked by "men" who do not have the u know what to confront in person.. Italians rule luv.. happy day..xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2012 8:50:00 AM

wow, Michael. So much stunning imagery. Sure to rank high for the tropical contest. I need to get going on this one. It's a beautiful contest for your beautiful poem.

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/10/2012 8:42:00 AM

Your flow and words build beautifully. Touchingly beautiful.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/10/2012 8:11:00 AM

I nominate this the top spot! You decorated your sleeping room so eloquently!! The imagery is breathtaking and inviting! I will rent this spot for my anniv. when you are done with it....A great write for YOU!! Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 3/10/2012 8:16:00 AM

Thank you "Paper Clip Queen"!!!!

Tracy Edwards

Date: 3/10/2012 6:22:00 AM

Ooo very nice Michael..*swoon* lol Hugs xxx

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 3/10/2012 7:26:00 AM

Thanks Traie...your comments are always inspired...