Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Paradise Under the Moonlight

As we lean together against our palm tree chair,
the moonlight peeks through with a warming glare...
Our glass like surroundings reflect a sky that is covering
our bare innocence...
A place for you and me to hide and be away from negativity
with a peaceful distance...
We can live off the fruits of each other and make love under a
raining moonlight...
The sky is our bedroom ceiling with the stars as our night lights...
An island called home for just you and me, to live and love where
we hold the keys...

by Michael J Falotico
for Gail's "Moonlight contest"

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 19, 2012 at 6:56 AM Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Tropical Theme" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Kash Poet March 17, 2012 at 8:16 AM A wonderful poem.Congrats Michael on your win in the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 16, 2012 at 7:50 PM congrats Michael luv on a fab win for this tropical treasure .. oh such a grand getaway.. JG is there luv.. wonderful as always.. xoxo..

Kim Merryman March 16, 2012 at 11:56 AM Congrats on your win, Michael! I really like the line "The sky is our bedroom ceiling with the stars as our night lights" Great imagery. Love, Kim

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 16, 2012 at 10:24 AM Congratulations Michael this is lovely xx

Charmaine Chircop March 15, 2012 at 10:11 AM So super romantic Michael..I love the raining moonlight indeed-Cahrma

Wilma Neels March 11, 2012 at 12:38 PM Quite a romantic write Michael, I am sure Gail will be enjoying this one. All the best to your for the contest :) love Wilma

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 10, 2012 at 10:15 PM Very romantic, Michael! I love it. Gail is going to have a tough time judging her first contest with so many great entries. I wouldn't want to do it...I love the picture of you and your beautiful wife on your blog spot. You look like such a happy couple! Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 10, 2012 at 8:23 PM thankxx luv for a terrific blog for Traie's sake .. thankxx for info too Michael.. JG in appreciative mode always and forever ..xxoxo

Kim Merryman March 10, 2012 at 11:07 AM A beautiful and romantic write, Michael. Excellent! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 10, 2012 at 9:21 AM ah so romantic .. paradise is where luv and lovers abide Michael as we know and share this .. a perfect expression for Gail's contest.. much good luck luv.. JG always in tropical mode .. xoxo.. yes a great blog and cannot believe u were also attacked by "men" who do not have the u know what to confront in person.. Italians rule luv.. happy day..xoxo

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2012 at 8:50 AM wow, Michael. So much stunning imagery. Sure to rank high for the tropical contest. I need to get going on this one. It's a beautiful contest for your beautiful poem.

Carol Eastman March 10, 2012 at 8:42 AM Your flow and words build beautifully. Touchingly beautiful.

Gwendolen Song March 10, 2012 at 8:11 AM I nominate this the top spot! You decorated your sleeping room so eloquently!! The imagery is breathtaking and inviting! I will rent this spot for my anniv. when you are done with it....A great write for YOU!! Gwendolen Michael J. Falotico March 10, 2012 at 8:16 AM Thank you "Paper Clip Queen"!!!!

Tracy Edwards March 10, 2012 at 6:22 AM Ooo very nice Michael..*swoon* lol Hugs xxx Michael J. Falotico March 10, 2012 at 7:26 AM Thanks Traie...your comments are always inspired...