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at first glance my heart leapt within me i felt a sensation i never once fell victim you stole my heart and i had to get it back i unleashed upon you the gift of my mouthpiece even Shakespeare would have given me my due with the eyes of a lamb you invited me to share the beauty spot of you gorgeous heart you came knocking at my door step at the eleventh hour my ark angel made my life a blossom of Lillis once in a lifetime i experienced heaven on earth exchanging rings inspirited our love beautiful like diamonds Rihanna did say our love proved spherical for it had no end till that day you left without a word under the wreck of a monstrous machine you left me for the land of the leals for even the gods adored you more than i and the paradise curtens fell a paradise too short indeed

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Date: 7/7/2013 10:02:00 AM
Kizito -CONGRATULATIONS!!! with your 5th poem theme contest. always & forever * Linda
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Date: 7/5/2013 2:20:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win. A well deserve win. Connie
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Date: 7/5/2013 5:40:00 AM
Hi, kizito, this is sadness painted in beautiful poetry. still sad,though. This is is wonderful. I hope someone somewhere will bring a longer paradise to your life soon.
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Date: 7/4/2013 6:14:00 PM
It is saddening to find joy only to have it taken away so abruptly. I bid you peace and comfort... Congrats on your win.... Jake
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Date: 7/5/2013 4:48:00 AM
thanx but it was'nt about me.just put myself in another person's shoes
Date: 7/3/2013 11:26:00 PM
KIZITO, Congratulations, <3:-) A wonderful 5th poem. thank you for choosing my contest........ ............. LOVE * SKAT
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Kizito Mbai
Date: 7/5/2013 4:47:00 AM