Paradise, Sunset Warms Loving Hearts, Because We Are There

Paradise, Sunset Warms Loving Hearts, Because We Are There

Paradise, sunset warms loving hearts, because we are there!
Dawn glistens brightly, as you bend to give life's sweetest kiss
Romance, your love-touch blessings give all, nothing left to miss,
our days on the beach, sun cast rays gleam upon your long hair.
Night's coming cool breeze, we kiss deep, as this dock creaks and sways,
darling, this is our Heaven, where love's truth forever stays.
Paradise, sunset warms loving hearts, because we are there!

10/15/19
For Make it Seven Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May
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Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 5:10 PM
I think your beach scene is one of my favorites on this list. It's so romantic. Congrats, my friend.
Callus Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Beautiful and romantic, Robert. Sunsets can be beautiful and more, especially if we are there to enjoy them. Congratulations on your deserved podium finish, my friend. Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 5:30 AM
aww so beautiful and romantic Robert, :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 6:51 PM
Wonderful write Robert, Congrats on your win..
Adams Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 6:38 PM
back to say congratulations on your win my friend :) hugs
Ravidas Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 6:54 AM
Wonderful poem. Its poetic symmetry looks like the axis around which the world revolves. What is this form called?
Adams Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 9:54 AM
such a beautiful poem...it sounds like your love lingers in all of life's beautiful moments....adore this one my friend :) hugs
Lindley Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 6:02 PM
Thank you my friend. Life has its many moments of glorious bliss, yet sadly it also has its many moments of epic sorrows too. Some are fated to have had several heavy does of each...
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