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Paradise Passing By

I seen it there in that girls eye. Paradise passing by. She turned away without a sigh. Distant dissapointment she couldn't deny. Someday dreams lilting in the air. She's young enough, half a care. Some people grow up, just don't dare. Love left behind what they didn't share. The more we live, the more we learn. To keep a watch at every turn. The things we see, sometimes return. Sometimes, flame out and never burn. Artist's, builder's, entrepreneurs. As they endeavor, learn what endures. What fades and what secures. Paradise passing through the years.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/30/2014 8:49:00 AM
You speak the truth, each day presents an opportunity to move in the direction of our dreams. In fact you might be living the dream. I enjoyed this write.
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Date: 8/26/2014 6:49:00 PM
Robert, I don't know what paradise is anymore... So this girl might be me! I live, and learn, and still nothing seems to work. Anyways, I love your rhymes. You are the best at it.LINDA
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:12:00 AM
lovely write with a great message here, my friend. Hope you have a good weekend : )
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:42:00 AM
Deep thoughts here, my friend !! Nicely done with soft rhymes. Enjoyed the thought process as I read the verses... so true !!
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Date: 8/16/2014 5:37:00 PM
thoughtful and thought provoking, my friend
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