Paradise On Earth

The Sun shines as gold, down the west                                                                                           Full moon is on the move, to rise in the east

When one gets to set,
The other begins to get

Birds are settling, into the nest                                                                                        Courteous caress of the breeze, is the best!

Sky is colorfully painted                                                                                                                       Many themes, this has hinted!

Stars are peeping up to glow                                                                                               Passage of time, added to their flow!

Strained soul sets to solace                                                                                                     Stirred senses, suggests the romance!

I desire here, forever to stay                                                                                                               As the mind fails, words to say!

When the lap of my love is lent as berth                                                                                This place becomes a paradise on earth! 




Above poem is adapted from the eBook “FIRE WITHOUT  FIRE IS ETERNAL! AND OTHER POEMS ON HAPPY LOVE ” by Mr.V.Muthu manickam. Copyright is held by V.Muthu manickam. Tweet him at : @mpvmuthu5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/29/2015 6:18:00 AM
Muthu,such prettiness to the natural beauty that is natures essence..thanks TonyTocaa
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V.Muthu Manickam
Date: 4/29/2015 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Tony. Be sure to enjoy more interesting poems in the times to dawn. @mpvmuthu5
Date: 4/26/2015 3:06:00 PM
V.MUTHU MANICKAM,,, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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V.Muthu Manickam
Date: 4/27/2015 12:15:00 PM
Good to hear this. Days of such poems of mine, decorating the prime space, is not far away. This is a poem written out of true experience. No doubt, more interesting and inspiring poems are in the pipeline. Thank you very much for the courtesy. @mpvmuthu5.
Date: 4/25/2015 12:03:00 PM
- A really beautiful poem, V.M.Manickam - Thank you for choosing to share it here with us - A warm welcome to P-Soup! - A greeting from Norway and Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/26/2015 12:12:00 AM
Thank you Anne. It was compiled out of sheer encounter with the beauty of the Mother Nature. Such comments shall inspire me. More unique and interesting poems are in the pipeline. My prayers and best wishes for everyone in the lovely Norway.
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