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Paradise Lost

I'm a child in awe ~
what are you doing with my legacy
what hope do I have?



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 5:20 PM
interesting question
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 6:08 PM
unfortunately ~ we have to be concerned for the children's legacy
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