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Paradise Lost

I was listening to the news the other day regarding the economy and job loss that has been happening in North America and for some inexplicable reason the picture that Raul posted for his contest popped into my mind. So, here is my entry for Raul Moreno’s Solace in Nature Contest. Recession rainbow Human foibles forgotten Nothing else exists.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/11/2009 3:25:00 PM
Love it! So much truth in a small package!
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Date: 9/11/2009 4:36:00 PM
Interesting concept. Keep writing. God speed in the contest. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2009 2:03:00 PM
Thanks for the support Robert...Raul
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:20:00 AM
How chilling, Robert! But I couldn't agree more. Here in the U.S. it does, indeed, seem like "nothing else exists" beyond the "recession rainbow." This is awesome writing! Sometimes even just a few words can say so much. Love, Carolyn (And good luck in the contest!)
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:14:00 AM
interesting and creative piece. you are such a talented poet. wishing the best in Raul's contest. Adeleke
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