Karla Null Poet Diamante

Paradise Lost

.                   Heaven
              peaceful, infinite
  mesmerizing, adoring, celestial
Angels, Saints, Demons, Serpents
            wretched, hideous
                      Hell

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Karla Null July 9, 2009 at 8:56 PM Ruben, thanks for nice comments, I can't get the centralizing right for some reason....Karla

Carol Sunshine Brown July 7, 2009 at 4:36 AM Karla, what a turn around in this piece. Outstanding writing. Love, Carol