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Paradise Festival

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Written: April 14, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Outside the domain of absolute morality, A wilderness of sacredness would cleave. A framework devoid of verdict and duality, Within this universe, truth does not deceive. I will be in sight anywhere we convene, We shall meet on that hallowed ground. Under those trees, one's soul is serene, Words betray to explain the global redound. Ideas are ephemeral whispers distraught, Words dance, and diction—is intricately wrought. Each term, even "each other," is a riddle to solve, In this endless cosmos, a value may evolve. Concepts float akin to feathers in the breeze, Words intertwine as branches from ancient trees. The notion of connection is a riddle to explore, In this enigmatic sphere, where truth may soar. Theory as a cosmic body glows in the whim, Language mimics an orchestra at its brim. Oh, gentle dawn whispers beckon you near, Peaceful coolness of a secret maze steer. As the sun rises, it yearns to share, Whispered secrets, it will declare. Come forward, wake up, and don't sleep again, Seek whims that dwell within your domain. Pursue the goals that fulfill your spirit, Because receiving is solely within erupt. The jewels in which your soul truly believes, Rise from your stupor, embrace, and conceive. People, as graceful as artists, grab a threshold's edge, Where spheres converge, two universes collide. They glide back and forth in a synchronized pledge, Where constraints fade, and enigmas may coincide.

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Date: 4/18/2024 8:06:00 AM
Sunrise yearns to share because she can't deal with its hotness alone. It adores her and burns us. "The notion of connection is a riddle to explore." Sure is. Nice one Sotto.
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Date: 4/16/2024 3:17:00 AM
Wise write that flows with much needed and profound reminders! To seek what we want and desire when time is on our side! I love the rhymes here and depth of what youv conveyed in the most eloquent manner! So much said using poetic techniques! I especially love the lines “As the sun rises, it yearns to share, Whispered secrets, it will declare. Come forward, wake up, and don't sleep again, Seek whims that dwell within your domain. Soul hitting! Such a powerful ending to this write!Pleasure readn
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Date: 4/15/2024 5:43:00 AM
Beautiful images and nuggets of wisdom sprinkled throughout, my friend:-- As the sun rises, it yearns to share, Whispered secrets, it will declare.---Pursue the goals that fulfill your spirit--wonderfully dwelling in your poetic prowess, Lasaad.
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Date: 4/15/2024 1:53:00 AM
Perfect poem. Sound ideas. As you sad truth does not deceive. A treatise on what is truly right. Great.
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Date: 4/14/2024 9:48:00 PM
It definitely sounds like paradise. This poem has an uniting appeal. I enjoyed this message.
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Date: 4/14/2024 6:04:00 PM
such a wonderful flow to your poem, dear Sotto. I agree. In the end truth does not deceive. I especially liked: Ideas are ephemeral whispers distraught,...—is intricately wrought. These lines captured my heart & spirit "As the sun rises, it yearns to share, Whispered secrets, it will declare." Those words describe how I feel each morning; I intentionally walk early watching the sun rise and listening to its secrets :-) I appreciate your advice within your poem. have a great week! Sara
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