Paradise At Peace

The birds are singing
The sky is shining
I can feel the hour coming,
Time for leaping
Time for laughing
I can see the earth is smiling,
Gardeners weeding
Gardeners growing
I can help the plants by knowing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 3:30 PM
Enjoyed reading ...Congrats on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 8:43 PM
Very nice, Eduardo. Congrats on the winners' list.
Brown Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Beyond Earth Hour" contest Eduardo. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:40 AM
Eduardo congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 6:18 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Eduardo. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Rodriguez Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 8:17 PM
Pretty good poem. Keep up the good work in writing them as they will only get better. :) -that girl
Sullivan Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 12:20 PM
Loved this cheeky little poem very much, extremely good write well done Amanda :)
Ekpemandu Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 2:57 PM
hi,its nice stopping by to read your poem..welcome to poetry....hope you find it exciting here like i did
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