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Paradise

Pacific beautiful sleeping flowers Accentuated by great diamond white towers Radiant many agile butterflies Accompanied by incredible golden pavements that makes treasure-lovers cry Dainty darling dazzling stars and a dangling debonair moon Illuminating pleasant terrace floors with angelic looks Seducing many ecstasy-lusting sights Enchanting ebulliently with an elegant view that encrusts the sun's bright light

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Date: 2/18/2016 1:22:00 PM
Hi White, here we have a Lover's paradise that shines like a priceless jewel in the mind Such a beautiful picture to hold in memories cords. An excellent acrostic my friend. A seven from me my friend....Vlad.
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White Sage
Date: 2/19/2016 7:58:00 AM
thanks dear friend, i appreciate you coming by, well wishes
Date: 1/3/2016 1:47:00 PM
Enjoyable..... nicely written
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White Sage
Date: 1/3/2016 4:01:00 PM
thanks Andrew, having you here is such pleasure
Date: 1/2/2016 10:46:00 AM
Happy new year fellow poet. This is lovely. Really, really lovely
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White Sage
Date: 1/2/2016 3:37:00 PM
thanks Funom

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