Paradise

Pacific beautiful sleeping flowers
Accentuated by great diamond white towers
Radiant many agile butterflies
Accompanied by incredible golden pavements that makes treasure-lovers cry
Dainty darling dazzling stars and a dangling debonair moon
Illuminating pleasant terrace floors with angelic looks
Seducing many ecstasy-lusting sights
Enchanting ebulliently with an elegant view that encrusts the sun's bright light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raven Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Hi White, here we have a Lover's paradise that shines like a priceless jewel in the mind Such a beautiful picture to hold in memories cords. An excellent acrostic my friend. A seven from me my friend....Vlad.
Sage Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 7:58 AM
thanks dear friend, i appreciate you coming by, well wishes
Joseph Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Enjoyable..... nicely written
Sage Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 4:01 PM
thanks Andrew, having you here is such pleasure
Makama Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Happy new year fellow poet. This is lovely. Really, really lovely
Sage Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 3:37 PM
thanks Funom
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