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Paradise

The lush green foliage, Palm trees waving in the wind On a lonely beach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/11/2009 8:28:00 PM
Theres nothing better to be in paradise with palm trees waving in the wind...LOL Great Haiku,love Christina
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Date: 12/19/2008 4:14:00 PM
What a vision...I can feel the breeze right now....always, Christy
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Date: 12/19/2008 2:27:00 PM
The scene you are describing here is marvelous. I love the thought of being on a lonely beach...Raul
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Date: 12/19/2008 1:36:00 PM
This haiku is nicely penned. You have a good one here Caramel. DN
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