Paradise

The lush green foliage,
Palm trees waving in the wind
On a lonely beach.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Vasquez Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 8:28 PM
Theres nothing better to be in paradise with palm trees waving in the wind...LOL Great Haiku,love Christina
Moreno Avatar
December 19, 2008 at 2:27 PM
The scene you are describing here is marvelous. I love the thought of being on a lonely beach...Raul
Neal Avatar
December 19, 2008 at 1:36 PM
This haiku is nicely penned. You have a good one here Caramel. DN
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace