Paradise

Wispy clouds playful
Creating quilted sky art
A butterfly day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sietesantos Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 12:36 PM
Beautiful Haiku with amazing imagery - I can just see this awesome "butterfly day!" Brava! Hugs. Pandita
Hoffman Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 4:02 PM
Thank you, Pandita! You truly brightened my day!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 1:13 PM
hello Franci Hoffman, it sounds like a lovely place. i want to go there. friend.
Hoffman Avatar
June 28, 2019 at 4:48 PM
Thank you, Darlene, for your lovely comment. Today is a paradise where I live. Of course, that may change tomorrow.
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