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Parachuting Seeds

dandelion tufts 
a flotilla of pappi 
parachuting seeds

(Haiku)


04/23/2020
Let the Pens Flow - Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas

Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2020

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April 29, 2020 at 12:20 AM

I think that's a really engaging turn of phrase: parachuting seeds. It reminds me of that scene in Pixar's, A Bug's Life, when the main ant takes a ride on the dandelion seed! A creative haiku, Emile.

April 29, 2020 at 9:26 AM

Thanks Timothy, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

April 26, 2020 at 7:41 PM

Love the image, Emile, :) congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

April 29, 2020 at 9:27 AM

Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

April 26, 2020 at 3:26 PM

Loved the alliteration in this with tufts and flotilla of pappi parachuting... Great job!

April 29, 2020 at 9:29 AM

Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

April 26, 2020 at 1:29 PM

Wonderful imagery... Congrats Emile..

April 26, 2020 at 2:17 PM

Thanks Jenish, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

April 25, 2020 at 7:14 AM

Amazing three lines. Will have to check out what you can do with four or more. Regards David in NZ

April 25, 2020 at 10:24 AM

Thanks David, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

April 24, 2020 at 9:41 AM

let the seeds and words flow! terrific

April 24, 2020 at 6:11 PM

Thanks Joan, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

April 23, 2020 at 2:57 PM

Wonderful picture, Emile, with your images taking flight! Fasten your seat belts! Taking off! Good luck in the contest!

April 23, 2020 at 5:33 PM

Thanks Sam, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

April 23, 2020 at 12:00 PM

I really love this, Emile! Seeds away!

April 23, 2020 at 12:16 PM

Thanks Kim, stay safe my friend, Emile.

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