Eve Roper Poet Verse

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Parachute Goes Up and Down

Children
huddled deep
beneath
parachute,
snicker.

A summer
festive
uplifting
fun game!

They sing, jump
ran round
rosy red.

Quite good
friends gather.

All fall down.


5/4/2019

Children Story

15 lines long 
syllable count 
2  3  2  3  2,
3  2  3  2,
3  2  3,
2  3,
3

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Early Jae May 28, 2019 at 2:26 PM Awesome subject! I always enjoyed those, Congrats!

Joseph May May 27, 2019 at 7:28 AM Wonderful write Eve...Congrats on your win...

Charles Messina May 25, 2019 at 8:39 PM Love the ending to this wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win, Eve. ~Charlie

Anne-Lise Andresen May 25, 2019 at 1:34 PM - Congratulations on your great suggestions, Eve :) - // ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser May 7, 2019 at 6:49 AM Quite a fun Charlieku! Well done.

Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2019 at 3:33 PM oh how fun, Eve. Can't wait to try this one You make it look it very easy!!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2019 at 1:38 PM - Sounds like a fun day ... lovely written, Eve - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham May 4, 2019 at 1:34 PM You've set the standard with this new form Eve. Good luck. Tom