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Paper Turkey

his thanksgiving feast
the loved ones around him there
picture hangs on wall

©Donna Jones

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/1/2014 6:24:00 PM

Short yet sweet write nice job here, cheri yes i love history and have study many subjects this is one of my daughters fav. cheri

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 12/27/2013 2:36:00 PM

You say much in but few words. I like it my friend. Good stuff!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/9/2013 3:44:00 PM

It's OK to say who he is Donna was it Dad? Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting on my verse. Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 12/9/2013 6:42:00 PM

ahhh thanks for explaining

Donna Jones
Date: 12/9/2013 6:05:00 PM

Hey Debbie....thanks for stopping....no...fortunately I have been blessed with a complete table all my life every thanksgiving so far....a man I've known most of my life...I went in his apt one time ..he never married...he had a page of a magazine taped on the wall of the I think Norman Rockwell thanksgiving family scene..there..so sad...

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 12/6/2013 8:27:00 AM

Wonderful, touching and sad. well done.

Donna Jones
Date: 12/9/2013 6:08:00 PM

Thank you....:-)

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/3/2013 6:52:00 PM

WOW very moving indeed great write

Donna Jones
Date: 12/9/2013 6:15:00 PM

Thank you Joseph....

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/3/2013 3:40:00 PM

Heart touching senryu..Yes dear..not so happy holidays indeed.

Donna Jones
Date: 12/9/2013 6:17:00 PM

For too many Charmaine...thanks for stopping...

Painted Hunter

Date: 12/3/2013 9:33:00 AM

This is a hard hitting little piece. Well done! How are ya, big sis?

Donna Jones
Date: 12/9/2013 6:18:00 PM

Thanks you..?..I'm doing just fine...hope you and yours have grand holidays!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/3/2013 3:39:00 AM

how sullen in its beauty, donnns...emthralled by your last line, just wow!...huggs

Donna Jones
Date: 12/9/2013 6:19:00 PM

Oh nette..thank you!

Jack Ellison

Date: 12/2/2013 5:01:00 PM

So sad Donna dear Donna! Love you sweet lady... big hugs, Jack xoxox

Donna Jones
Date: 12/9/2013 6:20:00 PM

Luv ya back..thanks for reading Jack...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/2/2013 9:40:00 AM

Good morning Donna.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/9/2013 6:34:00 PM

Reminds me of being a kid and living on a farm. I'm sure your critters are happy to have you.

Donna Jones
Date: 12/9/2013 6:32:00 PM

Good evening Richard....I'm running so very late in responding.we've been iced and snowed in for a week...and the critters water freezes every hour...what a bummer! Keeps me hopping....

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/2/2013 9:15:00 AM

Donna, my goodness. This tugged the heartstrings and really pulled on the tear ducts. Deep & striking Senryu...

Donna Jones
Date: 12/9/2013 6:22:00 PM

Thanks much Drake..

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/2/2013 8:15:00 AM

Wow, this is a truly sad write, but effectively written my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this amazing poem this morning! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Donna Jones
Date: 12/9/2013 6:30:00 PM

Thank you Russell....it's a shame holidays are a sad time for so many..