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Hills crowd close yonder, My cries echo back & forth- Th' void in my heart. Blameless Sunday night, Punished nonetheless: by your Selfish Monday gloom. Love does not live here, Not anymore; ever since We became brothels.

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Date: 11/6/2013 7:50:00 AM
Creative, Welsonn! Welcome to poetrysoup! All the best! Your souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 11/6/2013 2:56:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Welsonn ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Welsonn Goh
Date: 11/6/2013 2:30:00 PM
Got it! Thanks for dropping by! :D
Date: 11/6/2013 12:27:00 AM
Welsonn, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/6/2013 12:22:00 AM
I love the idea of being punished by another's Monday mornings. A thought that I can identify with so easily. Great stuff.
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Welsonn Goh
Date: 11/6/2013 3:21:00 AM
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Date: 11/5/2013 3:50:00 PM
Welsonn,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Welsonn Goh
Date: 11/5/2013 9:53:00 PM
Aww thanks! This place is massive! Feels like I've finally found home though.
Date: 11/5/2013 2:26:00 PM
Whoredome: Seperation of Church from state the Fallon way ? Locking horns 'pon younders cliff; bah bah, huffed the mighty crow ~ I feel you in this Pagan's poe ! Love, John
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